Aha! I see you paid tribute to how the producers labeled the screen used face casts. I can't find real photos for comparison anymore, but I got it instantly. Even if it's "temporary", I'm happy to see a face for him after such a long time. I still think he would look better with fake bogie frames to make the original wheels harder to see.
How did you leave the original foil (?) nameplates totally intact? Surely masking them would've made them fall off immediately, and scratching a paint layer would've been sure to peel off the print. Unless you peeled them off with a tool and put them on a sheet before reapplying them. Please show me in case I ever proceed with my own repaint. Regarding the black borders on the tender: I would've suggested masking the originals in two different ways to keep the exact shape (covering the borders first and then around them). The positioning is perfect, but the top and bottom lines are a bit off. Either way, he turned out better than the Season 7 colour.
About time I've seen one with the face repainted to look like her actual one. Maybe the pupils could've been left as they were, but the eyebrows are definitely better. The separate window stickers are also better than the original single one and less likely to be affected. All she just needs now is the tail lamp. Good job on all of them.